"Great Colossus"

By: K.J. Jonathon Lark

 

One day I was hacking into the president of the U.N.'s computer when I got an email from the the President of the U.N. himself. It said dear Lieutenant K.J. we have just found a planet called Kappen. We need you to explore it. We have a crew ready for the trip. Signed: Mr. Sumogachi. two weeks later

My crew and I finished training. We were at the X-11 launch pad and gave the security guard my intergalactic passport. I introduced my crew. "Here is Christopher Wolman-Oslen, Cory Klassen, Xochitl Torres, Acelynn Catcheway, Damien Sauve, and myself, Kamil Lark. Next we met the President of the U.N. himself, Mr. Sumogachi. "I wish you a safe trip," he said. "Here are some translators just in case of life forms". We went inside our ship and were in the cargo hold and found enough weaponry, ammo, food, and weird gizmos to last us 2 years!!! When we reached the command center it was amazing. I said,"we are going to have the time of our lives".and then we realized a man come in the ship and Cory asked,"who are you" and the man replied "Mr. Sumogachi sent me as your guard my name is Agent Diamond".

3 weeks later

"So you're telling me there is a big chance that there is life on Kappen?"-asked K.J. "Yes see I was a guard at area 51 and heard them talking about watching out for Kappen life forms"-said Diamond. After we heard Xochitl yell out "meteorite shower!!!" every one was in thier positions and I controlled the ship and the lasers. We saw a small planet ahead so we fought our way through and made it through and were on our way to the planet . 1 hour later "I wonder how it will look like,"said Xochitl in an exciting tone. We just landed and got out and explored with our new equipment. then we saw something squirming around we tried to catch it but we failed. Cory+Chris said it looked like a turnip. After a while, we found a little village with small+big huts. after a minute or so we saw vegetable like creatures pulling something out from a hut. it was a human the vegetables start saying things we don't understand. When I remembered the translators I whispered "get your translators out' the vegetables said "get that necklace into her heart! we were surprised to here that so we planned to save her. so when the creatures were not looking Cory and I went and freed her and ran to the bushes safely. We asked"Why were they going to stab that necklace threw your heart ?" while we pointed to the necklace and she said "it is part of a ceremony called sacrife". In addition, she asked , "were are you from" and we said "we are from a different planet called earth we came here because are world is a nightmare and we have to move fast before we die from gases and toxic waste" and she said "thats pretty bad you can come hear but bring plenty of weaponry because those creatures are strong and by the way my name is Ching and I'm a great photographer" you have cameras too," we said "what year is this" we asked and she said "it is the year 2024". 1 week later "well our stuff is all packed lets go back home" I said. when we were in the ship the ship couldn't start so me and Chris went to check out what was wrong when we realized our wires were cut when we fixed it and got out from under the ship the creatures were straight ahead charging at us so we ran in side the ship and yelled " RED ALERT RED ALERT! Battle stations everyone " everyone got weapons and start shooting at the creatures and destroyed everyone except for the leader "The Gate Keeper" and his 5 royal guards. So we took out the stinger rocket launcher and destroyed 2 royal guards with 1 missile. We used our second missile and missed them and the third and final one destroyed them all. after a while Ching came with pictures of Kappen and food from Kappen and we said "thank you for everything and have a nice trip back" when we all said "come with us" and she said "I would love to".

4 hours later

"so this is our planet and here is our leader" Xochitl said to Ching "do you have any vegetable creatures on your planet" and Xochitl chuckled "no".

 

The End

Dear Mr.Sumogachi

When we first landed on Kappen we were amazed of how many natural resources they have. Kappen has fresh air, clean water, beautiful rain forests, and fresh crops. But the things to watch for are little vegetable creatures so it is good to bring plenty of weapons.

Last Updated: November 26, 2007
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